>>3572047Theres things you could have done with editing to draw attention to his facial expression, such as with cropping and dodging/burning. This was just a quick sort of exercise, but I dodged the background, cropped in a way that gave me the most leading lines/negative space to work with, and slight editing on the face to give that extra drama to it. Don't neglect editing because you think it will look "overdone". it is a necessary step in taking good pictures.