>>2844899When I glance at the photo, my eye should be drawn to her face, but instead it's drawn to the fingernails (should be painted), the zipper, and the lightswitch (should be removed) instead of to her face.
In Lightroom, I would make an oval selection of her face and hair with radial filter. Then create a subtle blur on everything outside the selection by reducing sharpness and reducing clarity. Lightroom lets you feather the effect like a gradient. You can also rotate the oval selection, which is very helpful.