>>3154627You're not good enough to be this harsh of a critic, anon.
>>3154625Where do her shoulders end? The posing and framing need work, and her eyes aren't sharp. Also, brush the hair out of her eyes.
>>3154624I don't think I can save this one for you. It looks like it was fun to take this photo though.
>>3154629Have you taken even one class? It's okay to say no.