I like your site. Its very clean and crisp with a fresh feel. I love your portraits but sometimes the subject doesn't seem to know what to do. You need to add triangles. It draws the eye better. Human eyes love triangles. Cross arms, hand on hip, etc. I have the same issues but watching Jason Lanier on youtube has helped tremendously. Your time lapse videos are awesome! However, number 6 needs to go, there are at least three pieces of debris on the sensor, of them them a very large hair and I can't get past it. I love the time lapse of the lake. You should also take a model back to the railroad bridge and do a shoot there if you haven't already. I love the concert images. Concerts are one of the things I want to shoot but living in an obscure small town really doesn't give me a chance to shoot any. Overall, I think you're a great photographer and I love the site. I always make shit overly complicated and cluttered. I do not have a photography website yet but check out my book website, it sucks.
www.bedtimetalesfromtheapocalypse.comI attached a self portrait I took during a dust storm in Iraq. Tell me what you think.
