>>2994029As just an "attempt" its really quite good! The only really disharmonious element I can see is the wall with the swan emblem on it -- it kind of disrupts the triangle crowning the man in red.
Just for fun I put my framing guide over your image lol. Again it really isn't that bad and is WAY more interesting than a lot of the over-the-shoulder closeups that cinematography is riddled with.
