>>3242459background was difficult to expose for correctly given the sun was almost in-frame and my camera at the time was lacking in terms of dynamic range. Here's the original
https://imgur.com/a/xAXg5. Attached another edit to draw more attention to the subject.
I see the pattern your going for with your photo, but the texture isn;t doing it for me - not as it's composed here. This could've benefited from perfect symmetry (at least straighten your photo) and having the odd meter either dead-center or somewhere according to the rule of thirds. Not sure if the actual place allowed you to frame it that way, but the fact that it's the odd colour out gets lost due to its positioning. Also, it would have helped if you didn't amputate the bottom row.
