>>2908060I like where you were going with the shadow play. Forget the reflector, the shadows are cool. You're too close to your model and that's caused a lot of facial distortion. Next time, stand back and show more of your model, you won't get the distortion. And get rid of the t-shirt. Put something tight and pretty on her.
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