>>3121671These are all generally poor due to exposure/lighting, white balance, and too high of ISO.
You should have worked closer to any lights around you, and set your white balance with a grey card for each light. You'd get some funky backgrounds but at least she'd have normal skin tone.
>>3121672Awkward pose, cool location, move her to the side a bit.
>>3121674Awful WB, beam behind her sucks, focus is off I think it's on the window.
>>3121675Better but all previous problems remain. WB so fucked.
>>3121676Face too dark legs look weird, good position in the hallway, would move her one more step to her right.
>>3121677I like the pose more, but need to move her back to her right.
>>3121679Such a bad facial expression. Cool setting, but her face is underexposed
>>3121680Fix the marks on her legs in post. Can crop out the above stuff if you aren't going to include the entire mural.
>>3121681One of the better ones, but her face is underexposed again, and WB is unnatural.
>>3121880Get this shit out of here.
>>3124497Best in thread girl looks precious <3 do you have more
