>>3452404anon I feel like if you're gonna do this kinda thing, you gotta goth it up! Tread that fine line between cheesy and beautifully executed and dramatic. Also don't have your model in her normie bra, get them to wear something interesting and better suited to the image you're trying to portray. Also regarding models in bras, unless you're doing a lingerie shoot or have captured an exceptional candid, it kinda looks a bit like you wanted tits but they weren't available.
Also get yourself a proper veil to use next time. Good luck anon.