>>3774538>>3774541>>3774543Very nice, I'd let him cuddle me desu
The only thing to critique is that they're all widly differently graded. Headroom is fine because if you're posting it to Instagram and do their ratio, it'll cut off that headroom anyways.
>>3774681He looks scared, like you just said you were going to peg him and took the pic.
>>3774707Scary dude, nice portrait.
>>3774825Badly lit, bring up the exposure to at least make it a lil bit better.
>>3774850>>3774851These are the best ones imo
>>3774849Avoid poop pose
>>3774848Nice, but the other two are better.
>>3774853Weird pose, looks like you told her to rest her arms on that stone block and she was too tall and had to make it work to be able to do it.
>>3774854>>3774855Not very flattering angles for her.
You could also work on your skin editing and adjust some shadows and blemishes on her skin.
Colors and everything else are great though!
>>3774861Nice
>>3774862Something about this pose makes it seem like he's hunched over, apart from that, looks nice!
>>3775283>>3775294Very nice, super dig both of these.
>>3775550Very nice! Only thing I'd change is easen up some of the shadows on her chin and remove some of the stray hers on her forehead/cheek.
>>3776477Not a fan of photos with props like these, takes away from her and you imo. Also stray hairs galore and we can see her contact lenses.