>>2951442I'm not a portrait guy, expect no demanding criticism beside typical people stuff. Probably you wanted to cover the butt in blur, however, that is way too intense for me.
Her face looks as if she had been beaten, you will say so were light and shadow, that is honest. But maybe you want lighten shadows on her face like on her cheeks, below her lips (light forms a :( simley) and bags under the eyes. The light reflexes in the eyes makes them squint slightly, perhaps the brightness can be reduced too. Also her left hand appears like a three-finger ogre hand, her right hand is feminine since it's without tension and force.
>>2951443>>2951444The black and white image is reminiscent of raised blacks, the second gives more an impression of the bad air/fog. Since you have little contrast in both versions, the color also helps to lift the forest from the rest. I dislike both because of their low contrast.
