>>3177709>whats wrong with OP pic•Looks like a candy wrapper, and not in a good way; due to lack of a focal point for the bright colors. Like it needs a colorful bird or someone holding balloons or a punk rocker with a colored mohawk.
•Mise-en-scene/framing is off.
•Text overlay is horrendous.
It probably should have had some sort of long exposure with a super low ISO to keep it from getting boring. Though, that's sort of a crutch and only good if you are there and can play with it. Like here's a photo of it on my monitor like that. Still shit, but you get the idea since the background light is like a knife of light in the wrong places. Hence, the color problem.
