>>3822720I don't think composition is the issue here. And like the guy who cropped the gannet picture, you're missing the big picture.
>>3822700I enjoy the concept a person essentially isolated from the world around her by the phone.
However, I don't see the picture as remarkable, probably because there's too much stuff. Not from a framing point of view, that's on point. But some objects litter the image in an unpleasant way. Take the bucket with cleaning supplies and the towel on the faucet, for example. I'd probably make the boiling water unit warning stand out more too.
This will probably be a controversial opinion but I'd try to take the picture again when there's no one around that part of the room and then blend the pictures to get rid of the excess objects. Alternatively, shop them out, but it can behard to get a good result that doesn't look shopped.
As far as pure photography goes, you're alright I guess.
