>>3890965>>3889472this isn't what you asked but you're welcome. she's hot for sure but her posture is pretty rigid and the pose is awkward. there's motion because she's opening her bag, but it doesn't flow harmoniously and it doesn't take you anywhere in the picture. it's also not clean (see the Xs), but maybe that's not something you care about. also she's holding garbage, and looking like she has wartime ptsd. it's just not the "right moment" if you know what i mean, so it looks less like a portrait and more like a creepshot.
I LIKE THE COMPOSITION THOUGH. maybe if you took this photo another 9 times, the quantum streetphoto randomness would eventually produce something better. as a street photographer, you only control the composition. the rest of it is anticipation of moments.
it's also possible that i am prejudiced against suburban life photography because i've been conditioned to loathe it in an aesthetic sense. but if you live there, that's what you're photographing.