>>3428798>>3428801Get closer, fill up the frame, and try not blow highlights
>>3428720It's blown out and shallow dof which is a no no for this kind of pic
Composition wise you could have moved a bit and got rid of the distracting background
>>3428717Both skin tones and foliage are off toned
It's not most flattering angle but it might b/w imo, pic related
>>3428698It's good but I wish you had given it more space to breath
And move a couple steps to left to get rid of sky, it's competing with the smoke
>>3428537It's not bad but should get closer and pay get less distracting background it would be nice
