Another shot from the station:
>>3815733ty. but no, i'll keep it colored. without it there wouldn't be much focus towards the front end of the tram, which was part of what i was going for, along with the snow fading out towards the bottom
As for yours, desu there isn't much going on, and it's noticeably blurry. Try zooming out to get more of the background to get the colors of the sky, and just always keep in mind basic shooting technique.