>>2645583The empty space of the window is distracting, and you can't really tell what's going on.
>>2645587First: he's too far on the left; he's been plopped onto the rule of thirds grid. Don't be afraid to center your subjects, it's not against the law! Second: his environment doesn't have much of a story because it's just a brick wall. The inside of his apartment would have been a MUCH better place for a portrait like this. I suggest you check out Steve McCurry, William Albert Allard, or Sam Abell videos.
>>2645992Would be a nice scene if there was a child in the background. Other than the composition, your colors are wonky.
>>2646118>>2646119>>2646123These are okay, but the compositions seem a bit messy and chaotic. I could totally imagine you isolating the last drunk guy by kneeling further down, making the tent behind him a backdrop
>>2649594Put a little more imagination into it, anon. Look at the whole frame and make adjustments to the composition. Here it seems pretty jumbled. Reflections are cool to play with, but there's nothing interesting about this one.
>>2649596It's dull, there's nothing interesting about this photo.
>>2649597Same here. Ditch the telephoto for candids like that, get close.
