>>3709154Nothing interesting happening
>>3709156Background isn't adding anything. Could've been a nice shot of the dude writing in his notebook but the photo feels timid and creeper-esque. No connection, no moment captured well.
>>3709157Nothing happening. No moment nor graphic quality to the composition.
>>3709160Neat with the person's face somewhat matching their shirt. Needs more to be an interesting photo. Very one-liner.
>>3709167Scene has awesome potential but the photo had abysmal timing. The subject is overlapping with the two people in the background. Very sloppy. Try to read scenes and predict what will happen next to better position yourself and your compositions. You gotta be one step ahead or else you wind up with photos like this.
>>3709171Same comments as your second shot, more or less.
>>3709181Wack composition, no graphic quality despite that scene being filled with potential use of line and texture. All the shapes lead to the left frame edge, the person is weighted to the left, and their gaze is to the left. Result is very unbalanced image.
>>3709183Agree with a lot of this. Also, share your work anon. Let's make this a good thread and just ignore the loosers and baiters who come in with bad attitudes
