>>2933819>(2.62 MB, 4300x3440You actually appear to want to learn. So, I'll be more polite: read the sticky. Resize your shit before you post.
That being said, these pics aren't bad, but you still to add a little oomph to your editing. You definitely don't need to make drastic changes, since the problem for most people is that they do too much. But your shots are just very bland.
This is a fairly heavy-handed, stylized edit. Just to give you some ideas. I might not go this far for a finished product, but I wanted you to be able to see how some small changes can make a huge difference in the overall appearance of the image.