>>4054272I would say the photo is okay, its not bad but it does have the issue of:
1. Your shooting from above the subject and so you are looking down at them (not a deal breaker, I just try to level my self out when I can)
2. Your landing the focus on the lap of the subject whilst there isnt anything there, other than the wring.
If you had another version of the shot where we are catching the side of her face or even the back of her head. One with the top of the frame so it gives (the head) more context, and you could even get away with "burning" the right hand side of the frame. You can see she has a veil on which is cool, but you don't get much of it in the photo, do you have another shot of her?
>example image is kind of he blocking I am talking about 