>>3771533Good lighting, not much to critique. As always, maybe clean up some stuff, like the fluff on her sweater and ease up the neck lines a bit.
Nothing wrong with a clean sweater and would take you 30 seconds tops haha
>>3771652Felt cute, might delete later.
>>3771841Could be stronger with an expression, rather than the model looking at the floor like she's waiting for you to dial in the camera or stop chimping haha
>>3771842Cute, but you got a big ball of bokeh from the handrail right there on right. Plus a bit too much negative space on the left, considering how close/framed she is in the photo.
Got anymore from this set?
>>3771843Only a few people know how to execute the poop pose correctly, this ain't it chief.
>>3771991My /pp/ hard. I like that her butt is framed within the pillow, so it doesn't mix with the background. 10/10
>>3771994Smh
>>3772008Get one of those constant lights setups that look like strobes. Then put some softboxes on them, preferably a rectangular one and shoot.