>>3720619I'd up the contrast a bunch more--make the whites a lot whiter, mainly, but also darken the blacks a bit more. But that's a very personal aesthetic choice, not a rule or anything like that.
That being said, I like both of the shots you posted.
>>3721776>>3721777Not really portraits per se, with how much you've cropped out. There's not really even enough left in the shot to critique. Like... They're nice if you want to look at that particular woman's breasts, but I don't see a lot of artistic merit beyond that
