>>3924189Color looks much better, great job.
Crop is also nicer, its clear the middle mountain is the subject.
Too bad about the lighting though, the mountains are underexposed while the highlights are too blown out to have any detail. In the future if you've got good dramatic sky and lighting like this, you should bracket to get one shot exposed for the sky and one for the foreground.
Even with one properly exposed for the sky, you might be able to salvage the foreground just by bumping the shadows
You shooting RAW files anon?
>that dodge and burn halo on the right though