Quoted By:
okey
I tried to implement some of the things you critiqued here. this is the result. I haven't used the hair light here because I haven't managed to do the effect I wanted. I still work in a limited space and I haven't had another softbox with honeycomb in order to achieve what I'd like, the light from bare flash/umbrella was too bad.
Anyway, two snaps from today's shoot.
what do you think? any improvement?