>>2575910Pretty good tbh, had be interested and watching until the end.
The only thing I didn't like is right at the end: you should've had something cause the cable to be pulled out, like someone tripping over it or something, as it was clear from the footage beforehand that the cable wasn't pulled taught at all. Perhaps a montage of someone walking as the guy lowers the toaster, making the viewer think that the person is going to the suicidal guys room, however right at the end when the toaster is submerged, the walking person just trips over it and pulls out the cable.
idk though, maybe I'm just autistic
