>>2881835>any other critiques ?You need to concentrate on visual language - what are you filling your frame with and, more importantly, WHY.
Your composition seems to be a little all over the place: try to embrace the rule of thirds - place important subject matter approximately 1/3rd of the way into a shot, leaving ample space for a backdrop that helps to explain the context of the shot.
If you wish to impart the subject matter with a sense of space or power - then putting it in the center of the shot can help, especially if the subject extends to the edges of the frame. If the subject is in the center of the shot but does NOT reach to the edges you can create a feeling of isolation, like the subject is detached from its environment, and should be given specific consideration.
Think about how your shots "read". Where the eye should start, and what it should be considering after the main subject.
On the left you can see my version of your shot
>>2878382 >>2878384 (same light struts, same bridge)
Notice how the main subject matter is central - but reaches out to the edges of the shot.
I have also placed the main detail of the shot about a third of the way from the edge of shot - it helps to frame the subject.
>>2881835Wtf were you doing in the elephant? stay away from there, ew, i cant even... unless you're a student, in which case - home sweet home.
