>>2625760Your blacks are crunched up, which CAN provide an okay look generally, but it doesn't mesh well with your classical lighting style. Because of it, you're losing gradations and details in her face, which is making it look low quality and amateur.
You also went too far with her eyes. They're jumping out of her face and look painted in.
I'd take whatever layers you did skin work on and drop the opacity by 15%
Try your best to dodge out the line of her bra on the camera-right boob.
The stark contrast between the value of her face and the deep shadow in her hair framing it is making her look really pale and sort of "90s". I don't know how else to describe it, but it's not pleasant.
Your crop is also tighter than I would normally go for.
