>>2650535Nah, critique would be, you haven't quite nailed the flat, geometric, symmetrical thing due to a, b and c.
You've just put a whole genre on blast. Pretty hilarious considering this is a style that's massively in fashion and adopted by photographers like gursky and most of the dusseldorf school of photography.
If you're gonna do shit crit, at least know what you're talking about buddy.
>>2650736If I could offer any advice it would be, give your shots more room to allow you to correct the perspective and composition. And consider what height you're taking the photo at, most of these seem to be shot at eye level.
And your processing needs work, don't stress over this, it will come with time and practice.