>>2652320>>2652321>>2652322Not interesting. Could be, if you focused on making the foil look cool (thoughtful arrangement of foil and lighting wizardry), and composing the photos in anything other than the most boring way possible, which is what you've done here.
>>2652522skin tone is weird. generally too green but there's also patches that are too magenta. nice-ish composition. weird to crop at the elbow. i think i'd prefer this shot a little wider.
>>2652536great location, shit photo. THINK. make your subject look good or interesting or both.
>>2652595great light. i'm a sucker for portraits of chicks with hair being blown around like this.
>>2652630i like this. maybe dial the processing down a notch. also, i want this bitch to look mean or bored or neutral. i don't like the smile. i want mood.
>>2652808kinda cool, next time focus and recompose. i want to know what he's holding. i want to see his feet.
>>2652846out. potentially a good scene.
>>2652889keep experimenting, pal. this is a little 90s.
>>2653527both shit.
>>2653752tl;dr. utterly boring photo.
>>2655105gross processing, boring photo, contrived expression.
>>2655107cool lighting, work on your people skills. put your subject at ease, first. take the time to talk to them, get them laughing, tell them you're taking a few test shots - don't worry, and then encourage the shit out of them "these are great, man! you're a pro!"
>>2655110i actually like the composition of this shot. and the subject. sort of. processing is horrible, just make it a little more subtle. to nitpick: Too many elements overlapping for my taste (fine for some), and a little better posing would help.
>>2655114terrible. this is probably a joke but it's underexposed and the lighting is horrible.
>>2655165boring with lighting somewhere between mediocre and bad, and... have you dragged the clarity slider to the left?!