>>2661667the vegetation in the last three pics looks veeeeeeeeeeery intrusive, so try and make it less intrusive by desaturating everything but the portion with the model
or take away some green luminance there
k now that I look at the other pics I see that the biggest flaw is that the main subject doesn't stand out from the rest enough imo
use a wider aperture, selectively take out a bit of life from the colors of the background, whatever to make the subject look more important compared to the rest
>>2662162u liek vigneting?
'cause you liek it to much if ya ask me
srs also some of your pics are so dark it hurts
I get that you want to represent gloomyness and so on, tho there are better ways of doing that than make everything dark
same goes for the blurry pictures
they could be half interesting if they showed something interesting/out of the ordinary/strange/curious, but you're simply shooting common things and making them blurry
>>2662232your landscapes' colors are so out of this world they look out of place, you might wanna ease on that
same thing goes for the sharpness
also some of these show so much stuff it's difficult to find a main point and they look like a mess because of the quantity of colors and objects
>>2662242most of your pics look sooo vintage
if that's the effect you're looking for keep it up, the result is quite good imo
>>2662348the lightning in the military pics is pretty shitty
in the 4114 pic for example you only have a soft but strongly colored light coming from a couple direction, which results in hard shadows on the right legs and too much light on the face of the lower guy
yeah looked at the other pics as well, managing lightning and exposure seems the biggest flaw to me
the blonde cosplay girl is pretty bright, but in some pics the background is even brighter, in some other pics her hair's too bright
the composition's good, fix the lightning
