>>2671638i like this one, good colors, nice motive. however the composition could be better. the couple needs to be either more in the middle or more left (then you would need something in the right though, otherwise the left side will become too heavy). the lantern is too close to the upper border.
the pose of the woman is great. i think it would be even better if the man looked into the camera. a nice picture, without the flaws it could be a truly great one in my opinion.
>>2671626nicely executed, i really dislike the coloring though
>>2671449this one also suits my taste well. a little bit cut off at the right. and do you have it as raw? cause i think it would look even better if the grass was actually green. for now, the front is too dark.
>>2671431nice shot, but please straighten it and crop it right. i have a hard time figuring wether bnw or color works out better. at the end i think it would be a shame to throw these colors away, especially with that red exit shield. the man emerges better in the bnw version though. you might want to try lightening up the black carpets a bit in the color version so the man is more clearly visible.
>>2671404i understand what you wanted to do and appreciate it but it doesn't really work out here. the front/bottom part destroys the perspective rather than it's lines are a nice addition.
>>2671377>>2671374too random angles. the lines need to be part of a system.
>>2671346not bad but why did you cut off the 4? that's a shame. i think you gave away a lot of potential in this one.
>>2671347not bad but you cut it off badly at the bottom. read up about setting sizes.
>>2671655i would have given it a bitty bit more space at the top. also i wish there would stand a bright colored car in the bottom left corner. however, good picture imo
>>2671299i think it would be way better if you shot it from a lower position. might be untrue though. however, too much on the left, too less on the right
