>>2680458The processing looks good, if a bit bland. If you were looking for something to work towards, you could focus on skin tones, as she's looking very "average" and a bit pink. I'm not sure the look you're going for, but this looks like the "before" photo on a "learn to add style and mood to your photo!" eBook. You've taken it very natural and neutral, and there isn't much feeling in it.
I would do a bit of sculpting on her camera-right cheek to give her a bit more of a cheek bone, as well, since right now, her cheek, near her nose, seems very flat and almost saggy. The slight hot-spot on the cheek, level with her nostrils, gives the impression of a high-point there, making it seem like she has no cheek-bones. You can see on the camera-left side that that's clearly not true, so I would send you back to try to shape the camera-right side of her face up.
