>>2683675f/13 is waaay too much tho, there's no reason to use it unless your lens sucks, and even then it's exaggerated
with a 35mm for that I'd say don't go over 5,6 if you absolutely need it for some reason, and you could get away with 2.8 really
were you using any lights?
'cause the lightning isn't good, that shadow on her neck together with the fact that she's raising her head makes it look like she has a hell of a long neck, which is further accentuated by the fact that her hair's straight
it basically looks too high
next time tell her to have a normal pose ffs