>>2694411Eyes need to catch more light, gimmick processing
>>2694416Whites are painful, skin looks flat and lifeless.
Try increasing the contrast range on the skin as opposed to the whole image.
>>2694437Flour adds nothing, you look hello awkward in that pose
>>2694473Uh-huh
>>2694492Over exposed, looks like a closeted gay ghost sitting at an imaginary tea party. Non existent composition, eye height, centre frame, landscape on a portrait subject.
>>2694498Flat light, flat processing, what impression is this image supposed to evoke. All I'm getting so far is boring, might not be what you want for a self portrait.
>>2694596? Unless this is part of a series it should have never come off the memory card.
>>2694669Far too soft, weird shadows around your eyes
>>2694740Good use of dramatic lighting, could use some more light reflected up into the eye sockets.
>>2694743Better than the first 2, still ridiculously 90's with the high contrast and loads of lost detail. Put down the presets, learn to use curves.
>>2696247Still not sharp... Have you ever checked the focus on your camera?
>>2696737Congratulations alphon on the extra chromosome
>>2696741No one wants to see your pof profile photo. Get a real camera or get out.
>>2696830Odd composition, I feel like I'm at a quince and there's a greasy little gay looking up at me desperate for some cock. This may not be the image you wish to portray of yourself. Processing isn't awful, but is a bit heavy handed.
>>2696870Not bad, the lighting needs some work, your eye is a bit lost in the dark and the jacket is too tonally similar to the background. Needs more punch.
