>>2708137Well then,et me help you a little.
>move closeAll the leaves on the ground do nothing for the picture and waste a lot of space on the picture
Don't zoom in, just step a couple of steps closer to your subject. That way you would have given the two people a little more space as well, as the tent and the trees in the foreground make it a little crowded in the middle
>learn to use your gear properly >f5.6>30sec>ISO1600If you were going for the spark trails and ghostly figures then that's ok. I still would have lowered the ISO and opened my aperture accordingly. But the noise isn't bad so I guess it's ok.
It's too much for my taste though, here's what I would have done.
>f2.8 (+2)/f2.0 (+3) if your lens is capable >4sec (-3)>ISO1600 (+-0)This should give you pretty much the same light without going overboard on the Sparks and ghosts. Due to the hyper focal length the tent and your bros would still be in focus, as would the trees surrounding you.
The leaves in the foreground and the woods in the back don't add anything for me, thus they don't have to be sharp.
The technical part isn't as important as the wasted space part though, if the sparkly ghosts are your thing you did fine.
Picture makes me want to go camping though and the fire looks comfy, so you achieved that.
