>>2720402Too dark. I mean, I can tell you were going for an underexposed moody look, which is fine, but you just went too far; the shovel is barely visible in parts.
It's not a terribly creative shot, but it is what it is, and it's not bad for what it is. That's pretty much how I'd have framed that as well,
Not a portfolio shot by any means, but you shouldn't regret taking it.
>>2720404I'd dodge the paint splatter or whatever is on the wall to the left to bring it out more, because this is kind of cheeky (sniffing the garbage), and one can loosely connect narrative to those, like wavey lines to represent stench in a cartoon.
As with the last one, it feels too dark. I want some white.
Foreground is also a bit distracting, primarily whatever it is that's being bisected at the frame.
>>2720405Now this one's just shit, senpai.
