>>2867166the only decent photo you took
>>2867161awkward out of focus space on the right, if you want to give a sense of the environment then maybe have it in focus at least, also the colour is washed out, her gown is grey, for example
>>2867162needs more space on the sides
>>2867164that just looks awkward as hell, the pose, the smile, that she is noticeably not centered, but close enough to it that it looks like a mistake rather than a choice, also her skin is wayyyy to bright
>>2867172too much space above her, made worse by the fact that most of that space is blown out, then coloured this weird sepia
>>2867174the colours are nice on this with the exception of her skin
>>2867176the extra space above her actually works with this, since she is gesturing and looking up
>>2867177still too much space above, but now in the realm of acceptability
>>2867179I actually kinda like this, as the other anon pointed out it could use a bit more space at the top
>>2867188If space creates a virtual frame for the model, your frame looks something like pic related
