>>2867910I'll go ahead and get it out of the way, since other anons have said it: That sweater isn't doing her any favors. She's not a svelte girl (which is fine), but now she just looks frumpy. Also, her pose looks sad and bored. She's just slouching there. Needs to bring her head forward a bit, sit up straight, straighten shoulders, do something with her sad hands, and figure out an emotion other than "bored and bitchy."
>>2867911She just looks angry. She doesn't have that edgy fashion model stare I think you were going for. She just looks annoyed at you. Also, that light sucks balls. It's way too fucking harsh.
>>2867914Slouching, bored, pissed.
>>2867915 >leaning against lamp post with arms folded
This is High School Graduation Shoot 101. It's not really bad, per se, but it's cheesy as hell. At least she's conveying an emotion in this one. Also, it's a minor thing, but when you've got a girl who is a little thicker, and she's got super tight jeans on, you probably don't want the button/zipper area showing, because it looks like she's about to burst out. It's not very flattering, (but, then again, none of her wardrobe is).
>>2867917>i don't know what to do with my handsYou need to spend some time looking at models and posing and trying to figure that shit out. Also, she's back to angry face.
>>2867919I actually don't hate this one. It needed some work, but it had potential. If you had a reflector over to the left of the frame (her right), it really would've helped to fill out that crazy nose shadow. Also, I'm not crazy about her expression, but I'll admit that she's actually doing something other than anger/boredom, so I'll give her credit. Perhaps she's just an unhappy person.
>>2867921The meta framing thing is just cheesy as hell. Also, she's way too small in this shot. Also, the B&W does fucking nothing.
>>2867922Boredom: The Photograph.
