>>2870830I really like the contrast with the grey street and the fire. What I think would look better, was if the person were a little less cut off, or the angle were a bit higher, so we saw the whole head, but not necessarily the shoes. I also think that it would look a bit better if the person were a bit closer, though that may contradict my previous statement, unless you combine the two. Honestly, I feel like there is a bit too much blue going on with the jeans, and it adds a bit too much colour. Otherwise, the colour scheme is fine, and looks marvelous. I really like how reflective the pavement is as well, it's was obviously raining, and the fire there is the opposite of water, it's really cool. I also really like how the warm colors of the fire contrast with the cool/dull colours of the pavement, and I think if the person were a bit farther away from the fire, we could really see that contrast. (haha let me repeat myself a bit)
Composition: 5.5/10 work on the person in frame
Colours: 6/10 Work on the random blue
Action: 4/10 I think the person isn't in the best pose to show their actions correctly, maybe if you shot it a bit later, or perhaps a tad earlier?
Feeling: 6/10 I get a slight emotion of the colour, but otherwise I don't get much of an emotion. This is not your fault however, as the person's face is covered.
Averaged Score: 5.5/10
