>>2873782too much headroom, right hand crop is a bit awkward
>>2873787meh
>>2873785poor execution, next time you can come in closer, and seperate her from the building
>>2873795kinda cool, but yeah it's a shame she's got her eyes closed, and like the other anon pointed out her thighs look overprocessed
>>2873798you could've turned him more to his right so the beautiful sunlight would've shone more on his face, so underexposed too
>>2873822cmon, not only is it a boring shot, the dude kinda looks like he's holding his dick
a general advice for you after going through this thread is to come in/crop closer to the subject, and learn more about compositions. I really like your colours though. keep at it and you'll get better!