Tbh this second set isn't quite as good as the first.
>>2896406This one is nice, again the flare is cool but don't go way overboard and try to excite that in every shot. The people are a cool detail, but they're just too small. In the thumbnail they just look like bumps.
>>2896409This one has some nice texture.
The others are really kinda plain.
As for your statement about your film choice, this is Acros, a tabular grain film. (hence the term "Neopan") It's like Tmax and Delta, very sharp, very fine grain, but less contrasty. Tri-X has a traditional grain structure and has a different contrast curve, it lends itself to the nice rich tones people associate with it. the ISO doesn't mean too much, it's just the way each film is designed.
>>2896611>And I think that being able to make wet prints is one of the big reasons I shoot filmIf you haven't already made wet prints, I highly recommend it. If you have, but haven't made medium format prints, trust me when I say it's like a whole new world. The quality is amazing.
As others said please keep going and definitely make the square work for you. You can make some really unique stuff that normal aspects can't quite achieve.
If it's your cup of tea, you might find this book inspirational, pic related. He shoots all squares mostly, the book is all square stuff, it's awesome. You can check out most of it online if you don't want to shell out for the book.