>>2896674Man. She is glowing, and I don't mean because she's pregnant. Those colors are over the top, and that harsh processing is really unflattering. It looks like a nuclear bomb is going off. Also, there's a lot of wasted space in the frame. I'd tone it way the fuck down.
>>2896675Not a bad idea. Still lots of wasted space in the frame, and her almost-but-not-quite turned pose isn't the best. She needs to commit to be facing the camera or not. Also, that harsh light is making her legs look like garbage. Pregnant chicks will care about stuff like that.
>>2896677Probably the best in the set. Colors are too strong, especially on her electric blue pants. Still wasted space. Also, her legs are too dark and just end up blending in with the bottom of the frame. Your skin colors are way too strong in all of these
>>2896678This is just a boring, dime a dozen shot of a pregnant chick leaning against something. Colors are way too hot. Otherwise, it's fine. Not great, but fine.
>>2896681Man, those colors, son. You've got to tone that shit down. I'm not saying you need a faded, faux-vintage feel to your stuff, but this is bordering on cartoonish. She's got a killer smile, though, and genuinely looks happy. Kudos for that.
She'll probably like them, but you can definitely improve.
>>2896684This just looks silly.
>>2896685Way too harsh. The edgy, super contrasty B&W look just doesn't work for a soft, lovable pregnancy shoot.
>>2896691Don't sweat this one, bro. It was a fucking hard to execute idea. It would either look great or be a disaster. This, not so much. Just use it as a learning opportunity.
