>>2903667Great composition, but I hate how much you pulled the sky.
>>2903669Feels just a tad snapshitty, but I like it.
>>2903692Trying to feel moody, but it doesn't quite manage it. It just looks dark. Maybe don't darken it quite so much, and selectively retain contrast in some places?
>>2903699Does this maybe need some lens correction? I really like it, but the slight warp in the upper-left is distracting me.
>>2903721>>2903723These two are much better than
>>2903719but I can't explain why. I think just more interesting composition. The BW one could maybe use some tweaking to the contrast (I want to say it would look great shot with a filter for the sky, but I don't actually know enough about that). The first one I mentioned looks nice as is, but might look really cool as a big print that's wider (crop some sky out). I want that little building to be right under a fibonacci crop overlay, and it'll feel kind of like Firewatch.
>>2903750Not a huge fan of this one either, but like I said you're doing some good stuff. Keep it up!
>>2903754Ditto on "closer", get rid of some of the asphalt in frame by standing closer (not cropping or zooming).
>>2903804Definitely make the camera higher, and maybe shoot +/- 15 minutes for better sky.
>>2903806Nice, really feels peaceful. I'd consider trying to get some better colors in post, but if this is intentional as it is then that's okay too.
>>2903863Nice.
>>2903873I think I might prefer to have slightly better exposure on the stuff outside (but a little washout is good).
>>2903875Nice composition, but should be brighter.
>>2903909Composition really almost works, but it feels just a tad busy. Maybe take a step back and move the yield sign around the frame a little, and lower your DoF.
