>>2914684shit.
>>2914689turn down your saturation. there's no contrast also. its a bit meh as a result.
and you had lines that could of been used but you didnt. would of shot from the middle of the two tracks would of been almost the same image but more symatery.
>>2914710yeah flouresecent.
take a tripod and take a few shots in burst and merge them later. other than that Photoshop.
>>2914722alright not a lot of range a bit muddy and dull.
would of shot the horizon lower to emphasize the difference between the city and the grass.
>>2914728not too bad but a bit bland. maybe tweak the contrast and detail in light room or something.
>>2914734just becos you add a border doesn't mean you can escape your shit composition.
>>2914740resize
>>2914791shit the bokeh is awful and no regard taken to the background.
>>2914805would be nice if you crop the running guy and bump the shadows so you can see the girls faces.
i like it though.
>>2914806shit
>>2914808missed the focus and aint close enough.
>>2914817should of waited a sec to have the guy centered.
>>2914818fucking ace mate.
>>2914819bit shit. dont crop people at the feet and if your focusing on a sole subject have a sole subject not too awkward ones.
>>2914823why you nigger ?
>>2914824kinda alright not amazing but like
>>2914830like the tone
>>2914839i like it
>>2914849fuck me you better of just got into this shit that is the worst processing i have seen this side of a 14 year old jailbaits instagram.
learn some self control and taste fuck me.
>>2914939would of been better if you didnt crop the feet out. step back a bit as well.
>>2914972not enough details in the black of the top of the mountain apart from that pretty good. your eye gets drawn to the top so give your eye something to see. pretty good otherwise keep it up mate.
>>2915014been done to death
we get it film aint dead.
>>2915029yeah compisition is a bit bland.
