>>2929314Here is your critique
>>2929325>not a fan of the walls of text>>2929710>boring photos>not enough variety>don't admit to nervousness on your page>work on your confidence>>2929899>focus on the dominant eye>improve your editing>work on finding a styleI'll add some about your page
1. Get a proper domain. Wordpress in the URL is unprofessional.
www.sophietowlson.com is like $25 / 2 years. You can afford that
2. Work on responsiveness. I should be able to see the whole picture without scrolling.
3. If 'read more' is going to be a big part of the front page, put something there to read.
4. Homepage photo is dark and uninviting.
5. Add an icon link to your Instagram, where you now daily post pictures.
