>>2927399underexposed, bad tones. good pp could have made this good, instead you kind of ruined it
>>2927416what am I looking at, what is this?
>>2927441this shot has a fundamental problem, which is everything is tiny because you're zoomed out. For this to work better compositionally you'd have to zoom in onto something, chose a small section of that field to capture because capturing the whole thing doesn't work well enough
also
> f/11.0>Focal Length 18.00 mmWhy? Just for foreground sharpness?
>>2927444vertically your cropping is unbalanced, you have space at the bottom but it's very tight at the top
>>2927445>>2927448basically just zoom in on the centre, try to make extra shots of such scenes with a much narrower field of view and see how you can make it work
>>2927452Good ambience, just crop
>>2927462why does every star look doubled?
>>2927465on the trees it's good, but the sky is too blue
>>2927468you couldn't have cut the top of the trees on the left and you left way too much grass at the bottom. If you were trying to make the horizon be exactly two thirds up well that's a mistake, it look unbalanced this way
>>2927470can't see his face, too dark, bad focus too
>>2927481interesting effect, but lower blacks and get a better hairdresser, the haircutting is sloppy
>>2927496idk, get closer to your subject maybe?
>>2927498I want to believe this is Joe and Mika. Decent for what it is, just crop some of the bottom and the right out
>>2927500too far from your subject
>>2927501cool scene
>>2927560cool but too backgroundy, everything is distant
>>2927574cool light but nothing interesting going on
>>2927575fuck off
>>2927578you have two good things going on that clash in a bad way, the golden street and the storm. There's no way to have them close enough together to make it work. I'd say to a very tight crop on the storm.
>>2927582not very exciting, but at least level it
