>>2931608Too many Boats
Besides what is just kinda boring composition:
4 people
rocky shore side
What is 90% of west coast
Not being rude, obviously for where it is its pretty good. we can't help that there aren't many more interesting places that the average can go to for fun.
I will give you a run down of what is nice and can be improved
+Film, the grain adds a lot of personality
+ almost perfectly leveled skyline
+ cold matching the clouds
- Very blue, not like this detracts but a lot of this looks very blur even down to that clean white shirt. Given the opportunity i would have retaken this shot to capture a few more reds to highly the rocks, also the blue bleeds over into the girls hair
- too many boats, this is mostly a meme from a old photo teacher about composition, but having one "blemish" or group "blemish" is very dynamic and interesting, say if all all the boats were the white sails, it could pass. but there is that ugly little tug that is dark and adds just a little too much, Personally would crop out.
For film however I like this picture a lot, definitely has that imperfect memory look that film does well, But I'm assuming you might want a little more critique than that
