>>2938487This is great, but I agree with the other anon about perhaps a bit more space on the right. The lines are great though, it invites a longer look, and I'm a big fan of the translucent wall with the people behind that I didn't notice til I spent some time with it. Good shit homie.
>>2938526The neon isn't interesting/interestingly arranged enough to hold your attention, and everything else is underexposed to pointlessness.
>>2938529I don't like this at all, but you should post the rest regardless.
>>2938653A photo of someone getting ready to do something that would have been much more interesting to capture.
>>2938665Those reds are putrid, and overly faded blacks combined with boosted vibrance in the colour is not doing it any favours. The crushing and fading of everything outside the centre diminishes the effect of the perspective you were angling for, and leaves you hopelessly drawn to two people not doing anything of note. Apply thyself, and quit trying to polish a turd in post.
>>2938689No subject. I get that you liked the lights but you've got to do better than use the platform edge lines to lead nowhere at all.
>>2938697your processing is vsco as fuck but this one's alright. the intersecting lines of the dock and the boat/its path are a bit jarring though. May have been better to wait till the girls were further down the dock and the boat was further right.
