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Anonymous Thu 13 Oct 2016 19:53:23 No.2946002 View View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>2946026 >>2947487

Hey /p, i shot my first bunch of photos. I m a bloody amateur, cause of that can you give some advices`?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 13 Oct 2016 21:16:42 No.2946026 Report

Quoted By: >>2946452

>>2946002

Step 1; focus.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 13 Oct 2016 22:01:05 No.2946045 Report

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Step 2: Post the rest of the photos with EXIF.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 14 Oct 2016 18:14:09 No.2946452 Report

Quoted By: >>2948754 >>2951652 >>2951819

>>2946026
WOW alright he obviously meant to have it like this!!!!!

only the artist knows what he wants!!!

not everything needs to be sharp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 14 Oct 2016 18:33:49 No.2946457 Report

Quoted By: >>2948024

reminds me of goatse

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Anonymous Fri 14 Oct 2016 21:50:30 No.2946538 Report

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Overall, it's a good picture.

Posetives:
The composition and color.

Negatives:
The lines in the picture and composition is drawing my eyes to the big dark circle in the background. However, since that part of the picture is out of focus it is only a bit confusing.

TL;DR: A good first step, nice colors and composition. The small step that is needed to take it from good to great is to focus on the background.

Hope this help!

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Anonymous Sun 16 Oct 2016 14:49:25 No.2947482 Report

Quoted By: >>2947487 >>2947500 >>2947547

Op here
Okey until now thanks guys
what bout this picture?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Oct 2016 15:02:06 No.2947487 Report

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>>2947482
Your horizon is nice and straight, but the frame is just all empty space. Pull higher and have something in the distance, or pull lower and have a person/thing (spilled paint?) sprawled over the steps.

>>2946002
The focus needs to be on the tunnel. Put something interesting in the distance there. Is there a person doing something shifty through the tunnel? Are there animals around? Can you plant a prop?

Keep at it! You've got a good eye for locations. You just need a little work on your execution, and then you need to add some story to your shots.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Oct 2016 15:47:36 No.2947500 Report

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>>2947482
>Digital
Buy a real camera.
Only silver is worthy of capturing the moment.

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Anonymous Sun 16 Oct 2016 18:00:37 No.2947547 Report

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>>2947482
You're on your way, kid.

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Anonymous Sun 16 Oct 2016 18:31:47 No.2947564 Report

Quoted By: >>2947565 >>2951649

Im not at my home computer so I cant post EXIF

But I just started taking photos and using light room, thoughts?

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Anonymous Sun 16 Oct 2016 18:32:49 No.2947565 Report

Quoted By: >>2947567 >>2947874

>>2947564

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Anonymous Sun 16 Oct 2016 18:33:53 No.2947567 Report

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>>2947565

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Anonymous Mon 17 Oct 2016 06:28:05 No.2947874 Report

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>>2947565
this is nice. i like the contrast of blue and peach pastel colors of the water and the richer natural red and green of the background.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Oct 2016 13:23:51 No.2948024 Report

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>>2946457
Underrated post

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Oct 2016 19:42:22 No.2948754 Report

Quoted By: >>2951819

>>2946452
i agree but this still looks like shit

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 23 Oct 2016 05:48:05 No.2951649 Report

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>>2947564
this would be great for a frame within frame composition. its drawn to the center but there's just bokeh. maybe a subject in there would be neat.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 23 Oct 2016 06:00:47 No.2951652 Report

Quoted By: >>2951819

>>2946452
Not everything needs to be sharp, but at least something should be

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 23 Oct 2016 08:29:22 No.2951688 Report

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Good composition OP.
Now you have to find a subject to frame into your pictures imho

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 23 Oct 2016 09:57:32 No.2951712 Report

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>i got my first guitar today, here's my first time playing it, I've not had any lessons or learnt anything, I'm just hitting random strings and frets. How can i improve?

You see how fucking dumb you look now? Practice and learn daily for a year then come back.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 23 Oct 2016 13:38:45 No.2951819 Report

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>>2946452
>>2948754
>>2951652
I was kidding lmao the photo is shit, it's just that people say that shit ALL the time here and it's very retarded

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