>>2968520A 'good' shot, maybe try working with a speedlight or flash in certain areas to add emphasis on the bike.
>>2968524Poor taste in 2016. better be your parents house.
>>2968529Scene is amazing but you went too far in dodge and burning the rocks, work on the horizon too removing with clone stamp.
>>2968533I disagree with the lighting coments, you could add more in post but it seems this is a runway show and they chose to light it like this? (terrible on their end) Make the shot better work on depth of field next time to get only the model in frame
>>2968536Good, wish it was closer though
>>2968596There's a story here and you didin't capture it, take a moment next time to look at your surrounds and whats happening instead of just snapping real quick. Looks like a marathon of some sort
>>2968614Beautful, I think you can remove the refulction of the bridge at the bottom and it would still hold up, the bottom has alot of tones meshing and feels off.
>>2968615This one is also great, but i feel like you rushed the dodge and burning. horizon line is way too sharp, it would be better if there was less distiction between sky and horizon. Work on burning the poles a bit more just a bit.
>>2968617Level this out and its good.
>>2968618Like the other guy, you missed the story. Take in the moment, then compose your shot. Definitely not from this perspective either
>>2968620Not 100% focus, would go back and reshoot the 3 gears only.
>>2968621Interesting?
